This was just lovely. I love the contrasting between Draco and Harry, and the actual theme of the fic itself ...very innovative. It's nice to read something a little different, especially when it comes to Harry/Draco. :)

Also, I wanted to say that I have to disagree with the person who commented above about the use of tense in writing. I think that it's important to never confine yourself to one tense or another - if you are comfortable writing a tense, use it! It's true that a lot of people don't like reading present tense fiction, because they can find it confusing, but there are many readers who enjoy it (myself included). It's refreshing to read something that breaks from the typical novel format of everything third-person past-tense.

So if you're comfortable using present tense (which you obviously are), do it. ;)