Wonderful fic. I mean, I would consider this a wonderful fic coming from someone who had written a bazillion horrible ones in their deep dark past. BUT, as this is your first fic, it is EXTRAORDINARY!
The way you compare their personalities is succinct, simple, matter-of-fact, and I loved it. The first part hooked my in - probably because I am like Draco in that I cannot STAND having doors open around me. I will close and lock any door that I can around me, it's almost a phobia, really.
The characters were dead on, the writing was superb - I cannot compliment you too highly for this. Excellent job, I look forward to reading some other things by you (Fringe Lily (http://www.livejournal.com/users/thysanotus/) recc'ed you on her lj).
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Wonderful fic. I mean, I would consider this a wonderful fic coming from someone who had written a bazillion horrible ones in their deep dark past. BUT, as this is your first fic, it is EXTRAORDINARY!
The way you compare their personalities is succinct, simple, matter-of-fact, and I loved it. The first part hooked my in - probably because I am like Draco in that I cannot STAND having doors open around me. I will close and lock any door that I can around me, it's almost a phobia, really.
The characters were dead on, the writing was superb - I cannot compliment you too highly for this. Excellent job, I look forward to reading some other things by you (Fringe Lily (http://www.livejournal.com/users/thysanotus/) recc'ed you on her lj).