ext_8750 ([identity profile] dementedsiren.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bittersplendor 2004-07-03 11:18 am (UTC)

Am here from [livejournal.com profile] fic_fairy

Very very sweet, and it maked me ache while reading it. The different ways they find their comfort, and how it ends up working out is wonderful.

The only thing I'd suggest is that the lines And in the end, Harry finds out that he’s right, Draco isn’t just worth fighting for. Harry now has something worth dying for. be reworded just a bit. Its a very moving point in the fic, but the working on the "and in the..." sentence seems a bit off.

Other than that, beautifully done.

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