Wow, again. Thanks so much! I’m not offended at all, and it’s really great that you made a long feedback for me to read. I really need all the help I can get, and your constructive criticism was really… helpful. Sorry, I can’t help being redundant sometimes. I also have this fear of long stories, with lots of chapters, because I tried writing some stuff before and it went nowhere, and if it did, well, where it went wasn’t a very nice place….But I have this idea for a story now though, but I’m not sure if I’ll be starting it anytime soon. I’ve tried formatting it and things, but I think I’ll go practice first. :)

And of course you can archive my future fiction! I have to say I am very, very flattered that you want to archive what I write. :) I had such a sucky day at school, then I went to the library to check my account, saw your comment, and smiled the rest of the day. :D thanks for caring enough to do this at all, and I hope to read some of your stuff as well! Oh. I am friending you, I hope you don’t mind. :)